10/18/2005

Water Pills

Your hands reach just above the wave
The water, the hour, its wasting you away
You gasp for air, but you know its the end of your day
Wake up to the pain of life
Sleep to the sounds of pains
Wake up pop a pill
Wake up again, pop more pills
One more pill to go to sleep
Two more pills to dull the pain
Three more pills to make it go away
The container to make life go with it
Gasp for air
Plumit back under
Inhale the water
Count to three
Watch as dark engulfs the light
Watch as the surface gets farther away
Wake up to do it again

9 comments:

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